Sunday, 8 November 2015

My notes for MA paragraph!

Hi my friends
This is my notes for CA paragraph

As the educator John Holt wrote, "When we make a child afraid, we stop learning dead in its tracks."  

- spanking causes physically dangerous - 
Some children have become paralyzed through nerve damage from spanking
The lower back pain among adults may have its origins in childhood punishment




Para 2
TS - : spanking can cause physically dangerous at long term
 


E - Blows to the lower end of the spinal column send shock waves along the length of the spine, and may injure the child

CS -  The prevalence of lower back pain among adults in our society may well have its origins in childhood punishment  


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1 comment:

  1. Hessa your notes are very goodm but you need to take more and you need to indicate where did you take them from?

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