Essay plan

Spanking children is it an instrument of destruction or upbringing?   

 Thesis Statement:

This essay will argue that Spanking Children is a form of destruction for the formation of their personalities, not a form of upbringing them.

Intro	OS - Is spanking the best way to discipline children? When it deals with spanking the children, parents have different conflicting values..
	Expansion - As ،five-year-olds, the children who had been spanked were more likely than the non-spanked to be defiant..
	Ths - This essay will argue that Spanking Children is a form of destruction for the formation of their personalities, not a form of upbringing them.

Para1	TS - : Spanking children does not constitute a real deterrent to a child from repeating his mistakes and spanking cause depression inwardness for children
	E - According to studies that children who receive spanking often repeat mistakes   As well as the  risk of serious depression over their lives by 59%.
	CS - spanking a major cause of repeating the mistake sand cause depression inwardness for children.

Para 2	TS - : spanking can cause physically dangerous at long term
	E - Blows to the lower end of the spinal column send shock waves along the length of the spine, and may injure the child
	CS -  The prevalence of lower back pain among adults in our society may well have its origins in childhood punishment

Para 3	TS - :spanking can be an educational way
	E - said messenger of Allah ( PBUH ) :" Commend your children to perform prayer when they seven years old, and beat them for not offering it when they are ten ... bla "
	CS -  Non-painful spanking is an educational method.

Para 4	TS - some people argue that spanking children gives faster result
	E - However, children who are usually spanked show marks of aggressive behaviour
	CS -  therefore, spanking children never can be effective in enhance their behavior and morals toward others  .

Para 5	TS – some people may argue that spanking is effective in teaching .
	E - However, spanking creates fear in students and disperses children’s attention , also causes psychological problems in the long run .
	CS -  Therefore, physical punishment in schools is less effective than the positive ways of dealing with student’s errors

Con	In conclusion : there are many ways to raise the child , spanking absolutely not one of them .
	Refinement : -you can't prevent child from repeating his mistakes by spanking him                     -spanking also cause a physically dangerous
	Opening up: the person who use this way to raise his child may be he was raised by this way so that the problem didn't solve .  There is many different ways to punish a child without spanking him for example sitting in the corner without speaking is a kind of punishment