Elaf's Itroduction

Hello there, 

 I want to share with you my first notes for the introduction, also to help the remain members to begin their missions,
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- Is spanking the best way to discipline children? 

- People have different conflicting values when it deals with spanking their children, Some believe paddling is a form of abuse while others think it is a form of discipline.

- The most important thing is for the children to respect you not only as their parent but also as a person that they can count on whenever they need to.

- Unfortunately the only thing that physical punishment teaches a child is that violence is an acceptable way of solving a problem. Some children soon get used to the physical punishment and it means nothing to them. Other children may rebel and act out against this harsh treatment. Sometimes parents cause serious physical and emotional damage to their children when they use corporal punishment.

- As an adult, just imagine how you would feel if someone tried to correct your behaviour by hitting you! Don't you think your child has feelings just like you do?

- A multiyear study shows spanking kids makes them more aggressive later on – article from Time Magazine May 3^rd, 2010

• My thesis statement will be (This essay will argue that spanking is a way to destruction the children not a way of upbringing them.)

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 I will update this post inshallah with my editing as will as the remain tasks..

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regards, 

  Elaf



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OS:  Is spanking the best way to discipline children? when it deals with spanking the children, parents have different conflicting values..

UPDATE:

OS:  Is spanking the best way to discipline children?

E: “As ،five-year-olds, the children who had been spanked were more likely than the non-spanked to be defiant, demand immediate satisfaction of their wants and needs, become frustrated easily, have temper tantrums and lash out physically against other people or animals” 33 ( May 3^rd, 2010  Time, Physical Punishment Increases Aggression in Children)

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E: A multi-year study shows that spanking children makes them more aggressive later on.

Ths:
This essay will argue that Spanking Children is a form of destruction for the formation of their personalities, not a form of upbringing them.

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UPDATE

(Introduction Paragraph)

   Is spanking the best way to discipline children? when it deals with spanking the children, parents have different conflicting values. Some parents believe spanking is a form of abuse while others think it is a form of discipline. However, the only thing that physical punishment teaches a child is that violence is an acceptable way of solving a problem. A multi-year study shows that spanking kids children makes them more aggressive later on(Time Magazine, 2010). It might be argued that as five-year-olds, the children who had been spanked were more likely than the non-spanked to be defiant*. This essay will argue that Spanking Children is a form of destruction for the formation of their personalities, not a form of upbringing them.

* Alice Park, Time Magazine, May 3^rd, 2010