Ethar's CA paragraph

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- spanking gives faster results - 
- spanking disadvantages is more than its advantages -
- spanking have bad effects in children -
  http ://repository.nauss.edu.sa/handle/123456789/54438  spanking children usually ends up with a child has aggressive behaviour 

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Para 4	TS - some people argue that spanking children gives faster result
	E - However, children who are usually spanked show marks of aggressive behaviour
	CS -  therefore, spanking children never can be effective in enhance their behavior and morals toward others  .

Para 4 CA 

It might be argued that spanking children gives faster result more than any other instrument. When you spanked a child for doing something wrong he will be afraid to do it again because he knows that the punishment will be violent and painful. However, regardless of the advantages claimed, the disadvantages are surpass them. children who are usually spanked show marks of aggressive behaviour for example they always tend for use lying to avoid the punishment and they often disobedient , as will as they also tend to use violence when they face any kind of dispute while the children who haven’t spanked often show marks of a good behaviour . therefore spanking children never can be effective in enhance their behaviour and morals .toward others